*This poem is a product of Art-spiration, thanks to the wonderful images of Bonnie from original art studio
and the folks over at one stop poetry , enjoy...
*ALSO SUBMITTED FOR JINGLE POETRY'S POTLUCK WEEK 44 "PAINTING WHISPERS"
A coil of white ink
extends itself
from the slightest tract of
soft-tissue; a pale membrane aquiesces-
a diligent breath diffuses
beneath a gate of ribs.
This cord
of many sinewous strings;
traverses the narrow alley intersecting
my-self
and
a muraled door, opposing me.
Pirouetting
with the feathered atoms
of hydrogen
and oxygen, along its way;
it has become a wire,
now vibrating.
Its' entrance
into the mural;
although surreptitious, is marked
by a point;
a small hole consisting of
infinite dimensions, each one
flaring out from its epicenter;
tremorous arteries
siphoning and examining
small samples of color
from the strange skin of canvas.
As the fiberous vessels
begin to grasp the mural's edges,
its tarnished surface
subtly resembles a mirror,
splintered and fractured,
in which I can detect faint shadows
of my-self; opaque projections
of an old color film.
I am, now-
two murals;
reflecting upon each other
the infinite array of chroma
and the absense of it.
Very cool. I do see that we hit on very similar ideas with this picture--though we took them in different directions--you've got some great phrases in here too, suggesting a fusion of the organic with the inanimate, an exchange of life force, and an enlargement rather than a subsuming in the merge. I liked this especially:
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with the feathered atoms
of hydrogen
and oxygen, along its way;
it has become a wire,
now vibrating.
very procedural, but musical as well.
You have projected so much of your own beauty, complexity and intrigue on my little offering. I feel honoured.
ReplyDeleteoh wow...very nicely done...the vivid biological descriptions linking art and the person is very well done...my heart beat poetry on one side and art on the other..smiles.
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ReplyDeletewith the feathered atoms
of hydrogen
and oxygen, along its way;
it has become a wire,
now vibrating.
That's my kind of poetry!!
PS - I wrote a comment to your comment on my blog.
wow...such a vivid picture you create. the fusion of self and mural is so delicate and intense. did i say wow?
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDeletekeep up the excellence.
Invite you to write something based on the image you see,
ReplyDeleteHope all is well.
Thanks for the attention.
Appreciate your input.
Cheers.
signed in to follow your blog.
that's very elegant...
ReplyDeletepainting does inspire, poetry is the siblings to art/panting.
Thanks for sharing.
Wow this blows me away, incredible!
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