Wednesday, June 29, 2011

The Sentiment

She left her glasses
on the bureau in my room-
for a second date.
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8 comments:

  1. Brother OllieJune 30, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    Smooth..

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  2. Jack Edwards PoetryJuly 20, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    Brilliant.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 20, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    very profound Haiku.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 7:58 AM

    Subtle, very subtle.

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  5. Tara TylerJuly 21, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    clever!

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  6. hyperCRYPTICalJuly 22, 2011 at 12:58 PM

    This is brilliant - I did that!

    Anna :o]

    http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com

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  7. AnonymousJuly 22, 2011 at 4:17 PM

    lucky you! smart her! ;-)

    so much story conveyed in so few words.

    My offering is here: http://shawnbird.com/2011/07/18/summer-rain/

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  8. AnonymousJuly 25, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    incredible.


    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
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